Not much new here, but I still want all of you to take a look at this story from the Daily Inter Lake. Read it, then note the comments from Montanaeasy56 and HF Davidson regarding the confusion about who is speaking about the condition of the injured man near the end of the story. The story shifts from one speaker to the next without first alerting the reader.
On Wednesday we'll begin our discussion about the basic news story. In addition, we'll talk briefly about transition grafs and how to guide the reader from speaker to speaker without confusion (we'll give trans grafs even more attention later in the semester).
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